Great job on your story, it reminded me of hanging out with my buddies listening to them play guitars. My family is a little different because you seem more out in the open land, but it seems we both have close family ties. I like your music and thought it complemented your story well.
I really liked your video. The pictures worked well. I thought they really illustrated your past and where you are from. That guitar jam looks like fun. I thought your music worked well too. If you were going to change something, I would think about using a variety of effects between pictures.
I really like the page-turning effect you used; it makes the digital story seem more like a story in a book. You used a good variety of pictures, and I liked the music you selected. Your family is different from mine in that you live in a much more open area, which is wonderful..so much beautiful scenery! Great job, overall, with your digital story, Noah!
I definitely know how it is to live in the house in the middle of nowhere. :) I enjoyed your photo story, but I was confused when you said you take in stray kids, although this could very well be me thinking to much into it. If you were to do this again I would put in a picture that explained that line. Other then that I think you have a really great photo story.
Excellent work! I loved the music! Who is it? It flowed nicely with your images and set a strong reflective tone but energetic at the same time! I liked the part about your family taking in stray animals and kids! It makes your family seem warm and welcoming! I liked learning that your family comes from wide open spaces. It seems as if that is where you are comfortable! Thanks for your attention to detail! Your words were easy to read and they did not disrupt the flow of images!
You did a really great job. I liked the music you used. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your story, it reminded me of hanging out with my buddies listening to them play guitars. My family is a little different because you seem more out in the open land, but it seems we both have close family ties. I like your music and thought it complemented your story well.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your video. The pictures worked well. I thought they really illustrated your past and where you are from. That guitar jam looks like fun. I thought your music worked well too. If you were going to change something, I would think about using a variety of effects between pictures.
ReplyDeleteI really like the page-turning effect you used; it makes the digital story seem more like a story in a book. You used a good variety of pictures, and I liked the music you selected. Your family is different from mine in that you live in a much more open area, which is wonderful..so much beautiful scenery! Great job, overall, with your digital story, Noah!
ReplyDeleteI definitely know how it is to live in the house in the middle of nowhere. :) I enjoyed your photo story, but I was confused when you said you take in stray kids, although this could very well be me thinking to much into it. If you were to do this again I would put in a picture that explained that line. Other then that I think you have a really great photo story.
ReplyDeleteExcellent work! I loved the music! Who is it? It flowed nicely with your images and set a strong reflective tone but energetic at the same time! I liked the part about your family taking in stray animals and kids! It makes your family seem warm and welcoming! I liked learning that your family comes from wide open spaces. It seems as if that is where you are comfortable! Thanks for your attention to detail! Your words were easy to read and they did not disrupt the flow of images!
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